Over at Everybody I Shot Is Dead, in the comments, is a discussion about the One Page Challenge suggesting someone should post the first page of their first screenplay.
Ok.
And all I have to say is, oh my.
One more thing, the answer to that last question, lest I leave you twitching with curiosity is, "Sudden onset of ground."
Anyone else?
Hey Cynthia, you've been tagged.
ReplyDeleteI thought I'd responded to this. I know I thought about it, and thought, this isn't bad. It's not as sharply written as your newer stuff, as crisp, maybe, but it's not gosh-awful at all. If I find the first page of my first novel I promise it will be embarrassing, it will be so bad!
ReplyDeleteSudden onset of ground is funny.
hey, that script template you use ROCKS
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